Page 74 – Toasty

I think this page turned out decent enough. I’m a little concerned that the action in the second and fifth panels isn’t clear. Let me hear it.

In other news, voting will get you not ONE but TWO full page sneak peeks. future 1 future 2

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7 Comments

Comment by Ronin
December 14, 2007 @ 2:28 am

For me, I had no probs of understanding what’s going on. So, it’s just exciting how the action will go on.

Dunno what I should think about the less colors…higher rate of updating vs no background colours oder redefining lines…well, go on, it’s still one of the most amazing webcomis in the internet.

Comment by CosmicAussie
December 14, 2007 @ 4:57 am

I don’t know man. I still think that a bit of background color would make it a hell of a lot easier to understand.

Comment by Explodicide
December 14, 2007 @ 10:43 am

Panel 2 looks fine. The only visually ambiguous thing that I see is the odd tangent between panel 4 and 5. The way that the foxfire visually matches with the edge of the Robo-General’s mustache is a little odd. It almost looks like it might have been intentional?

Comment by mrdaveryan
December 14, 2007 @ 10:56 am

Whoops, I meant panels 2 and 4.

I didn’t even notice the foxfire to mustache thing, but now that you pointed it out, Expolicide, I agree that it looks odd.

Comment by mrdaveryan
December 14, 2007 @ 10:57 am

Wow, sorry about butchering your name in that last post.

Comment by Tamarani
December 14, 2007 @ 3:08 pm

I was a bit confused as to what was going on. Did McFly use the fire breathing attack again, or was it something else entirely? Also, did he teleport around, or was it a different view point? I suppose with McFly, you’d never know XD

Aha, yeah, I’ve not reviewed in a while, so lemme say the last two (three?) pages have also been most excellent. The fact that McFly has decimated even more robos is awesome.

Comment by Anonymous
December 14, 2007 @ 9:49 pm

You say McFly is running out of steam, however we did see him work on this “doll” while Ralf fought with Lord Ruber, I’m guessing that has something to do with the facr McFly is ablle to take on an entire robo assault force.

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