Thursday, January 10, 2008

Page 77 - Aww

The first two panels on this new page suck rubber ducks. Poorly planned, poorly executed. If anything, I probably should have cropped them closer. I like the other three panels, though, especially numero quatro.

I apologize in advance to anyone who has trouble reading the handwritten dialogue.

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Anonymous Tamarani said...
January 11, 2008 8:28 AM  

Lovin' the handwritten dialogue boxes, mrdaveryan, sir. Works really well and I prefer it - kinda suits the comic more, too.

I like that this whole time he's been fightin' a straw fake, the loser >] McFly is damn cool, and Douchebag has no chance of facing him down.

I kinda thought that the hand crushing the straw dummy was Ralph's at first, because of the blue [damn bad eyesight & no glasses at work] but obviously not.

Anonymous DudeTron said...
January 11, 2008 3:23 PM  

Fucks yeah! General Douchebag = Phail. Mcfly = Win. =D

Awesome page dude.

Cant wait to see what happens next!

Anonymous Ronin said...
January 11, 2008 3:51 PM  

Ooowiees, the background colour is...back!! I really love this page, the handwritten Speakbubbles (do you call them like that? dunno) look great, I agree with Tamarani in that point.

Just pretty damn cool one!

Anonymous Gorges said...
January 11, 2008 4:09 PM  

Where did our man Ralphy go?

Blogger mrdaveryan said...
January 11, 2008 4:16 PM  

I'm actually surprised you guys like the handwritten bubbles, but I'm glad you do. They'll improve with practice.

Gorges, Ralph is down there somewhere... in a bloody lump... right next to Ruber.

Anonymous The Sly Thief said...
January 11, 2008 11:27 PM  

Handwritten is supremely better.

It adds character to the strip - not that it needs anymore. However, it's certainly an improvement in my opinion. It's easy to read and especially using bold for emphasis is a plus. Also, most professionals use hand written speech balloons, I believe.

Anonymous FaggotDan said...
January 11, 2008 11:35 PM  

Hey-oh.

I dig the coloring--not entirely by suprise. The above shot with general (for lack of a better name) Douchebag flying so high above makes it seem so surreal. And the giant robots. They add to that whole surreal bit.

Also, haven't ever posted a comment before, but I plan to do it more often. Fun stuff: your shit is.

Anonymous iridian said...
January 13, 2008 4:18 AM  

well, as long as you keep the 'effects & sound' - writing in its original , ill like it :D
coloring ftw - but I did start to get used to the white background anyway

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